Television dominates the free-time for too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others. Do you agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Iam
writing to you regarding the student feedback you asked to provide you through a letter. I am Dinushi Ranasinghe and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
completed my
course
at your school about cake making
course
almost six months ago. I really enjoyed
participating the
Suggestion
participating in the course
course
. Because, it was a very structured
course
and
school
Suggestion
the school
has provided more facility to
practicals
a customary way of operation or behavior
practice
after completing the
throry
a well-substantiated explanation of some aspect of the natural world; an organized system of accepted knowledge that applies in a variety of circumstances to explain a specific set of phenomena
theory
lessons. I baked different types of cakes and decorated them based on various themes. During the
course
, we learnt how
to make
Suggestion
making
a cake structure in easiest and correct way.
Also
, we had a small group class.
Hence
, we have ability to share our experience, knowledge and opinions among
stuedents
a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution
students
. I would like you to conduct a Chinese cooking class in the future. Since
this
cuisine is becoming more popular in our town, many people are interested in learning it.
Moreover
, as there are not many restaurants in our town who make authentic Chinese food, learning
this
will give many people an opportunity to serve as a Chinese cook in renowned restaurants. Hoping to learn many more authentic dishes
at
Suggestion
in
your class.

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