Television dominates the free-time for too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others. Do you agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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writing to you regarding the student feedback you asked to provide you through a letter. I am Dinushi Ranasinghe and

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completed my

course

at your school about cake making

course

almost six months ago. I really enjoyed

participating the

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participating in the course

course

. Because, it was a very structured

course

and

school

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the school

has provided more facility to

practicals

a customary way of operation or behavior

practice

after completing the

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a well-substantiated explanation of some aspect of the natural world; an organized system of accepted knowledge that applies in a variety of circumstances to explain a specific set of phenomena

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lessons. I baked different types of cakes and decorated them based on various themes. During the

course

, we learnt how

to make

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making

a cake structure in easiest and correct way.

Also

, we had a small group class.

Hence

, we have ability to share our experience, knowledge and opinions among

stuedents

a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution

students

. I would like you to conduct a Chinese cooking class in the future. Since

this

cuisine is becoming more popular in our town, many people are interested in learning it.

Moreover

, as there are not many restaurants in our town who make authentic Chinese food, learning

this

will give many people an opportunity to serve as a Chinese cook in renowned restaurants. Hoping to learn many more authentic dishes

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your class.

Sat Dec 14 2019

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Television dominates the free-time for too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others. Do you agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Fully explain your ideas

To what extent do you agree or disagree that Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions.

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

demand for food is increasing worldwide. what is the cause of this? what measure can the international community take to meet this demand?

You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music.your neighbour. write a letter of appology explaining the ocasion and it wont happen again

Woman and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender.