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Essay topics: Some people think that the government should give money to creative people, such as artists and musicians. To what extent do you agree?

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Over the
last
 few decades, since the technological revolution, art became an increasingly controversial topic. Some people think that the
government
 is the one who should financially support creative people while others believe the opposite
First
 of all, it is known that the culture is what defines a nation.
there
Suggestion
There
 are many cities,
such
 as Paris and Rome, around the world which became famous due to artworks and monuments. These artworks represent culture, heritage and history. They serve to educate people around the city and act as landmarks for visitors and tourists. The
government
 should be the one who financially helps artist in order to produce these kind of artworks because without them cities would be less interactive and attractive.
On the other hand
, there are numerous countries which struggle with more significant issues.
For example
,
state budget
Suggestion
the state budget
 has to be equally shared to public services like healthcare and education system.
This
facilities
Suggestion
facility
are
Suggestion
is
 crucial in a country’s development. Global warming and pollution, over the
last
 decades, has become a more serious
issues
Suggestion
issue
 that many countries are trying to solve before it’s too late.
countries
Suggestion
Countries
 like China and Thailand have major problems regarding the air pollution. Another argument against
government
 funding for art is that artists do a job like any other professional and so they can easily earn their own money by selling their work. The lack of funds can give them motivation to create more artwork, make brighter performances. There are many creative people who became
remarkable artist
Suggestion
a remarkable artist
 only because of financial struggle. In conclusion, I agree that
government
 should give money to creative
people but
Accept comma addition
people, but
 only on the condition that there are no urgent issues that must be solved in the country.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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