University students are increasingly studying abroad as a part of their studies. Do the Advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

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University Students are
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a high level of going abroad to study in overseas schools as a part of their
further
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education
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students experiencing a different culture and
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are the advantages while the disadvantage is stay far from home and family. In my opinion to study in a foreign country is more beneficial for the student’s future career and a challenging thing. The greatest benefit to study overseas for the student as part of
education
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and getting knowledge of a country’s different aspect cultural linguistics experiencing a different
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. Being in a foreign country teaches you many things that may not possible to be done in your own country or gives you an unlike experience.
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I studied in China for four Years of my bachelor
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it was really challenging for me to adapt to the culture and the
food
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here I took me a long time. I pushed myself no matter what. These challenges you face abroad today will make you a strong
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tomorrow and
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the main advantage for a student. The main challenges that a
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person
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person's
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overseas is
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overseas are
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communicated
and adapt to that
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,
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and Environment. Sometimes
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it is
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scary and you get depressed.
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, while I was studying in china the problem for me was to adapt to the
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and language it took me a while. Often I face
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problem. Most of the students prefer to go abroad to continue their
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. While students go abroad and experience a different
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life it
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life, it
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fact, these
experiences to lead him to a fruitful
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in future of studying abroad. As a contradiction these hardships and experiences of studying makes a successful
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in future
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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