Today, more and more students are deciding to move to a different country for higher studies. Do you think that the benefits outweigh the problems?

Many people strongly
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accept as true; take to be true
believe
in the argument, that upbringing of one plays a vital role in
possibility
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the possibility
of getting success in
life
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it is
it's
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the state of relying on or being controlled by someone or something else
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on the hard work and
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the ability
to accept
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take exception to
challenges
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individual
individuals
individuals'
individual's
passion towards setting and reaching goals in
life
. In the matter of fact, upbringing of a
child
certainly helps in becoming a good human being. As some fundamental values, that person
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get something; come into possession of
receives
in his/her childhood will remain with them for
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the entire life
an entire life
life
.
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always have
always has
have always had
a positive outlook towards
life
, and that enables them to live a balanced and
deciplined
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disciplined
life
.
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sort of way of
life
could assist them to
achive
to gain with effort
achieve
achieved
success in
life
.
However
, at the same time it is
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clearly revealed to the mind or the senses or judgment
evident
that there are manly successful personalities don't have good family background, or some of them even don't have family either. Because
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it's
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life
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start to turn on
their own, that that dedication zeal and hard work can be the source or medium that can take them on top of the
life
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guarantee
guaranty
, that
child
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a professor
professors
, unless the
child
doesn't work hard to become. In my conclusion, good
upringing
properties acquired during a person's formative years
upbringing
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children
the child
a child
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ensure
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In order
to be successful
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,
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the individual
an individual
has to be a deterministic and should have a positive attitude towards
life
.

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural immersion
  • Global citizenship
  • Self-sufficiency
  • Cutting-edge facilities
  • Networking opportunities
  • Career advancement
  • Financial constraints
  • Acclimatization challenges
  • Support network
  • Educational disparity
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