The tradition that family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts?

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Many traditions, both eastern and western have many cultural similarities
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was to have family meals together.
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, sadly over time
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wonderful practice seems to be deteriorating and is quickly being replaced by a fast food culture and isolated take away dinners. Primarily
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the fast paced lifestyle and heavy job requirements are fuelling
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. Earlier, a special day
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usually the weekends have been a day for the family in which time was spent together at church followed by a lunch or dinner.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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