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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world why is this? what are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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Solar
energy
 is an emerging technology as a
resoucers
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resource
resources
researcher
 for household
energy
 in most of the
nations
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nation
 in all over the world. Many of them are using solar technology
instead
 of
power
 from other sources.
Although
installation cost
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the installation cost
 is very
high but
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high, but
 using of
this
type
 of sources significantly increasing.In my opinion
,
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,
we have more benefits by utilising these
type
 of energies. The main advantage of utilising solar
energy
 is that we can
esaily
with ease ('easy' is sometimes used informally for 'easily')
easily
 deploy
yhese
plural of "this"
these
 cells in our
convinient
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
continent
 places. In houses
,
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,
we can completely avoid using of external
power
supllies
give something useful or necessary to
supplies
.In agriculture
,
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,
educations and industries it is playing a key role.We can reduce
problems
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the problems
 facing through electricity.It is easy to instal and easily removable.
For example
,
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,
if we are using solar cells as an
energy
 source in our
house
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house, then
then
,
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,
we cannot face
power cut problem
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the power cut problem
. There
is
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are
 no side effects by using these
type
 of sources. One of the main
challanges
take exception to
challenges
 that people are facing is high installation cost.In
summer season
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the summer season
 it generates more
energy
 which is sufficient to our
applications butin
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applications, but in
applications but in
 winter situation is completely
reverse
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reversed
 to the summer season
,
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,
In that season sunlight is very dull.
Moreover these
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Moreover, these
type
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types
 of sources are cannot affordable to each and every person.
For example
,
Accept space
,
in
industries
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industries, power
power
 consumption is more so
,
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,
for large amount of
power
more number
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number
 of solar cells
are required
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is required
then
 cost increases.
However
,
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,
solar
energy
 has become significantly increasing.
Although
 solar
energy
 installation is very high using of these sources are steadily growing throughout the world.Solar
energy
 is
collabiration
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a collaboration
collaboration
celebration
collaborations
 of both advantages and disadvantages.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable energy
  • Subsidies
  • Tax credits
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Efficiency
  • Off-grid
  • Carbon footprint
  • Climate change
  • Initial investment
  • Energy security
  • Sustainability
  • Decarbonization
  • Grid parity
  • Feed-in tariff
  • Energy storage systems
  • Payback period
  • Net metering
  • Silicon panels
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