In recent years, people in many countries have been able to afford more material possessions such as electronic kitchen appliances, computers and vehicles. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this increased level of affluence, and give your opinion about whether this is a positive or negative development.

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The business problem that I was working on is identifying the features of the consumer products that are important f

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the product’s success. The analysis includes identifying the critical features in the products that are most important for i

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success in the consumer market. The main tools that were used in

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analysis are Excel, SQL, Python, HDInsight and Hive. The following aspects worked well with

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HDInsight. 1. Flexibility in creating clusters,

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and nodes. Creating clusters and

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the containers and increasing the nodes could be done by changing the cluster configuration. 2. Well integrated tools.Tools like hive and

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the data

into Hadoop using Hive from HDInsight. 3. Transformation of data could be done at the same place where the data is stored. We could use Hive to transform and aggregate the data within Hadoop. The following aspects did not well that well. 1. Data transfer - Data needs to be transferred to the Azure

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over the network. All the data needs to the sent over the network for processing. 2. Since the tools are integrated and packaged together. Any change to individual tool or replacement of individual tools would be a challenge. 3. Currently there seems to be limited support for visualization or presentation of data. We could

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use python for similar business problem. Python provides better control of processing and good visualization support for data.

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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