The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The tables
illustrates
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information about the sale of
coffee
and
banana
in five
european
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countries
during
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1999 and 2004. Units are measured in millions of
euros
.
Overall
, the amount of
coffee
sold increased in 2004 as compared to 1999 for all
the
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five
countries
.
On the other hand
, the amount of
banana
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bananas
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sold decreased in Sweden and Denmark and rose
for
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all the other
countries
. The greatest disparity can be seen in
UK
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the UK
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where by
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the year 2004, the
sales
of
coffee
increased by nearly 14 times.
Furthermore
, The
sales
increased by 3
million
euros
in
switzerland
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and by 0.7
million
euros
in Belgium. The least amount of growth is in Denmark and Sweden where
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coffee
sales
saw a mere increment of 0.2
million
euros
during
this
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period. Switzerland saw the most profit in
banana
sales
as by 2004, the
banana
sales
grew 3 times. UK and Belgium
banana
sales
increased by 4.5
million
euros
and 3.4
million
euros
respectively.
In contrast
, Sweden and Denmark were the only
countries
where
banana
sales
declined by nearly half.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, banana, countries, euros, sales, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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