the number of flights has increased. do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.

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have seen an increase in the number of flights that take off

everyday

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every day

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this

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This

situation has both positives and negatives.

overall

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Overall

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feel that

advantages

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the advantages

are more than disadvantages.

there

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There

are umpteen of advantages of increase in the number of flights.

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firstly

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Firstly

this

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has created more jobs for the people.

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more and more flights are taking off

everyday

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every day

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the demand for employees in aviation companies is soaring to cope up with the pressure of public booking seats

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hence

(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result

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, more and more unemployed people can get jobs at airports.60

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addition to

this

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, increased numbers of flights have benefited middle class people as they can enjoy air travel now easily.

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Sine

there are more aviation companies in the market

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the competition among them is tough to provide better service at more affordable prices.

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this

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This

makes ticket prices of planes cheaper with better services.

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nevertheless

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Nevertheless

, the drawbacks of the mushroom growth in numbers of flights are conspicuous. One of these is the damage to

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the environment

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They

are the biggest culprit of

environment

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the environment

being polluted tremendously.

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Since

they consume a huge amount of fossil fuels, they give out hazardous gases in

environment

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the environment

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The

precious resources are

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being depleted largely by planes which are non-renewable.

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additionally

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Additionally

, the construction of airports near the residential areas is the main cause of noise pollution. The very frequent flights make

deafening noise

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a deafening noise

which disturbs the locals.

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, people living near airports can not have

sound sleep

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a sound sleep

at night due to noise from planes which doesn’t allow people rejuvenate for

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next day’s tasks

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the next day’s tasks

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summarise,

although

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there are few cons of increasing numbers of flights,

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feel that

pros

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the pros

far outweigh the cons.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

278 words

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the number of flights has increased. do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.

Fully explain your ideas

Some local languages are becoming extinct. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modren life style. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages overweigh the disadvantages?

Some health problems are directly linked to people’s life choices. Why do people make these choices? What can be done to encourage them to make healthier choices instead?

Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day’s work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

Many countries spend a lot of money in art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say money is better spent on public services and facilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.