the number of flights has increased. do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.

#flights #outweigh

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have seen an increase in the number of flights that take off

everyday

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every day

this

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This

situation has both positives and negatives.

overall

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Overall

refers to the speaker or writer

feel that

advantages

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the advantages

are more than disadvantages.

there

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There

are umpteen of advantages of increase in the number of flights.

firstly

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Firstly

this

has created more jobs for the people.

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more and more flights are taking off

everyday

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every day

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the demand for employees in aviation companies is soaring to cope up with the pressure of public booking seats

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hence

(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result

Hence

, more and more unemployed people can get jobs at airports.60

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addition to

this

, increased numbers of flights have benefited middle class people as they can enjoy air travel now easily.

sine

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Sine

there are more aviation companies in the market

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the competition among them is tough to provide better service at more affordable prices.

this

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This

makes ticket prices of planes cheaper with better services.

nevertheless

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Nevertheless

, the drawbacks of the mushroom growth in numbers of flights are conspicuous. One of these is the damage to

environment

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the environment

they

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They

are the biggest culprit of

environment

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the environment

being polluted tremendously.

since

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Since

they consume a huge amount of fossil fuels, they give out hazardous gases in

environment

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the environment

the

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The

precious resources are

also

being depleted largely by planes which are non-renewable.

additionally

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Additionally

, the construction of airports near the residential areas is the main cause of noise pollution. The very frequent flights make

deafening noise

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a deafening noise

which disturbs the locals.

For instance

, people living near airports can not have

sound sleep

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a sound sleep

at night due to noise from planes which doesn’t allow people rejuvenate for

next day’s tasks

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the next day’s tasks

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summarise,

although

there are few cons of increasing numbers of flights,

refers to the speaker or writer

feel that

pros

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the pros

far outweigh the cons.

Mon Dec 16 2019

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