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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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Products which are produced at the far end of the globe are reachable with a click thereby different countries are becoming more familiar. I totally regard
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s human life better. There was a major disruption in the field of internet as well as technology in the late 20th century.From there, the leap mankind has made in different technological advancements are immeasurable. Computers and their related technology are one
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d the way man communicate with each other from any part of the world. The major consequence of internet is the E-commerce, which is considered to be a byproduct of internet revolution. E-commerce allows a user to see , review
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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