In most countries, animal and plant species are declining rapidly. What are the causes of this? What measures could be done to prevent this decline?

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It is certainly true that animals as well as
plants
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plant
species are decreasing rapidly, in few nations.
However
,
this
eassy
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
will discuss about the reasons in the
first
peragraph
one of several distinct subdivisions of a text intended to separate ideas; the beginning is usually marked by a new indented line
paragraph
and
then
it will concentrate on its solution in the subsequent paragraph. There are some
couses
give rise to; cause to happen or occur, not always intentionally
causes
why the number of animal and
plants
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plant
species is
decrease
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decreasing
.
First
and foremost reason is "modern technology ". Due to modern technology new buildings and factories are construct which leads
this
problem
, because
vast amount
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the vast amount
a vast amount
of plants are axed for establishing new buildings.
Therefore
the number of plants and animals are decreased. Another reason to consider is that new towns built
repaidly
with rapid movements
rapidly
owing to enough place, many
forest
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forests
are axed which give birth to
this
issue. To put it simply in
this
modern
era many
Accept comma addition
era, many
plants are axed for building new towns and cities.
For instance
, I watched a news on television in 2018, according to
this
information almost 3000 plants are axed for
builting
a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place
building
new town
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a new town
. With regards its solutions, some solution
are
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is
also
available to tackle
this
problem
.
Firstly
,
government
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the government
should
bocome
enter or assume a certain state or condition
become
hard laws to solve
this
problem
and give hard punishment to offenders.
Secondly
,
authorities
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the authorities
should
educated
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educate
the people about
this
issue to solve it and individual must try to follow these instructions
.
Accept space
.
For example
, police officers should try to go
in
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into
schools and public places to aware the children as well as people about
this
issue. In conclusion,
Although
it is very big
problem
, some steps are
also
available to mitigate
this
problem
through government and individuals.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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