These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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It is certainly true that everyone
have
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has
their own electric device
such
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as computer and telephone, which helps to do
job
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a job
jobs
at
home
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, nowadays.
However
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,
this
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eassy
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
will discuss about the merits of working at
home
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in the
first
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peragraph
one of several distinct subdivisions of a text intended to separate ideas; the beginning is usually marked by a new indented line
paragraph
and
then
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it will concentrate on its negative effects in the subsequent paragraph. There are some advantages of working
in
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from
own
home
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.
First
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and foremost merit which comes to my mind is " saving
time
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". To put it simply, people waste their
time
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to reach their working place, if they
work
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at
home
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, human beings can easily save their
time
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because they do not need to go another place for doing
work
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owing to computers as well as telephones. Another merit to consider is that if a person doing
work
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at
home
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, one can do some funny activities when he feel bored and spend own quality of
time
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with their family.
On the other hand
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, there are few disadvantages
also
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.
Firstly
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, if
individual
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the individual
an individual
do
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does work
work
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at own
home
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, one can
do not
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do, not
concentrate on office
work
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as a proper way because family members are disturbing to a person when he do
work
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.
Secondly
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, one cannot follow the instructions of their seniors when he
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work
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works
at
home
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as well as do not
learnt
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learn
about discipline.
Finally
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, it is very necessary to
creat
put into a certain place or abstract location
set
create
environment according
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environment, according
to
work
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for concentrating on
work
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. For
examply
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
, employees
are do
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are doing
do
have done
work
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efficiently when they
work
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at
office
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the office
an office
with the presence of their employer. As
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such it
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such, it
can be concluded that
although
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working at
home
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is
become
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becoming
popular
,
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,
thesedays
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these days
and it is beneficial for worker to save
time
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and spend
time
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with their
family but
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family, but
due to
this
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peolpe
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person
people
facing some problems
such
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as they do not concentrate on their
work
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and do not follow the rule and regulations.
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