Some people prefer living in a house while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in an apartment?

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It is irrefutable that majority of masses give more preference to live in a house while opponents feel that the advantage of living in an
apartment
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is more.
However
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, the disadvantages of living in an
apartment
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overweight the advantages. There are
number
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a number
of demerits to live in an
apartment
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.
First
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and foremost disadvantage is that people facing some
fanincial
involving financial matters
financial
problem when they stay in an
apartment
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due to their poor
fanincial
involving financial matters
financial
condition. A
best
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good
illustration is that my uncle who is living in an
apartment
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,
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,
face many financial problems to pay the rent of
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apartment
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apartments
the apartment
an apartment
.
Secondly
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, if people living in an
apartment
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,
then
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they
facing
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are facing
face
problem related to space because due to
modern era
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the modern era
, the rent of enough space is very
high so
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high, so
mostly
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most
people avoid
such
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types of places and give more preference to manage with little space.
Moreover
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, when human beings living
such
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types of
place
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place, then
then
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they
do not doing
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do not do
don't do
are not doing
aren't doing
have not done
haven't done
activity with freedom.
On the other hand
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, living in an
apartment
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is beneficial in some ways.
Furthermore
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, people can easily go for their work as well as their study purpose when they live in an
apartment
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because they can easily get an
apartment
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which is near of their work place.
For example
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, in Bathinda many students are living in an
apartment
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for doing their education. As
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such it
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such, it
can be concluded that,
aulthough
even though, in spite of the fact that
although
people give more preference to live in an
apartment
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,
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,
I would like to reiterate the trend of living in an
apartment
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can be considered is not more beneficial.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • privacy
  • outdoor activities
  • gardening
  • customization options
  • renovate
  • structural changes
  • investments
  • appreciation/depreciation
  • maintenance costs
  • utility costs
  • security features
  • gated entries
  • surveillance systems
  • shared amenities
  • community centers
  • suburban
  • rural areas
  • commutes
  • urban centers
  • public transport
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