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Internet access for minors can be dangerous. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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Current younger generations are widely using the web with high developing technology seems positive over many skill developing factors and
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 there are some negative aspects to be taken care, as the essay described below. Students are able to learn and able to posses the great skills in various fields through internet, which they wanted to learn apart from their academic
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.Online supplies valuable sources in multiple forms
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 as online learning tools
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web sessions
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live connections etc., Considering my experience, As
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 have started learning the IELTS through internet. Many platforms like
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YouTube
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Instagram and wide
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websites, driven
 me
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 making me learn things quicker and easier.
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, there is a possibility that the teenagers can be felt in a negative way while surfing the internet.Floating advertisements
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 as online chat room and the content which is irrelevant to their age may lead them to turn in some other diversions like social media and
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families, by
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 make them not to focus in their studies In summary, Limited access with some timings and restrictions over them and addition to that there should be a proper monitoring over the growing young ages by their families by motivating them in a right way is a prime responsibility to each and every adult

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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