Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world

Perhaps the human is the only living creature that has distinctive and diverse languages to communicate each other. The primary means of languages is to communicate effectively. Each nation, tribes and country h
as
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have
their unique
language
and these languages and their formations were quite different than the way s
ee
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sees
them now. If
communication
is the main reason we have our own languages, I would opine that the f
ewer
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fewest
few
languages are far better for effective
communication
and
hence
we should not worry that much because some of the languages are getting extinct. Some would argue that a
language
preserves the culture, tradition and history of a group of people. That’s true to a certain extent and it is not impossible to decipher the history when the
language
is no longer alive.
For instance
, have not our researchers in modern time deciphered the manuscripts and written symbols of cultures and c
ivilisations
a society in an advanced state of social development (e.g., with complex legal and political and religious organizations)
civilizations
that no longer exist? The changes of languages and their evaluation cannot be prevented. Even the modern English we nowadays use is much different than it had been a century ago.
Language
changes because people need better and easier
communication
way. From
this
regards, if some rich and modern languages are used throughout the
world
, the
communication
among people would be better than ever.
This
would reduce the
language
and cultural barrier we have in our
world
. Languages which are getting lost are mostly spoken by fewer people. It is not uncommon that only a few people speak a particular
language
and that’s why it is in danger. Most of
such
languages are spoken by a tribe and people of
this
tribe have developed in terms of education and lifestyle and have accepted a new
language
. In some cases, we should put more priority o
n
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in
people’s life standard rather than focusing on the
language
they speak.
Finally
, modernization is a natural trend and we cannot prevent it. The prominent languages of the
world
would prevail and they would be spoken and used by more people as a natural trend. The fewer the languages, richer and more effective they would be. In conclusion, we should foster and accept the diversity of languages because of its uniqueness and t
radition but
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tradition, but
should
also
accept the natural trends of modernization and evolving nature of a
language
. We should not worry too much about a
language
’s disappearance and should accept the fact that fewer languages in the
world
mean better
communication
and better understanding among nations.

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