Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recyle more of their waste?

#people #waste #homes #governments #requirement #laws #recyle

As the

world

popullation

the people who inhabit a territory or state

population

reaches a staggering 7-billion the amount of waste which we daily produce has exponentially risen. It is a common site for the citizens of developing countries to notice

mountains

Suggestion

the mountains

of garbage lying on the side of the road

Suggestion

an interstate highway,

therefore

lawmakers in these countries have proposed mandatory recycling even at a small scale level

such

as individual homes. In

thios

denotes a person or thing

this

essay I would like to elaborate my views on

this

proposal and explain why

such

actions are imperative for our survival. The earth is changing rapidly, we have a drastic climate change seen

ubiqouesly

. The reason behind

this

is lack of human intervention when it comes to protecting the environment.

humans

Suggestion

Humans

for their own petty gain have forsaken their future generations.

Nienty

Suggestion

Ninety

-nine percentage of

scientis

a person with advanced knowledge of one or more sciences

scientist

belive

Suggestion

believes

believe

believed

the climate change to be a fact - which would eventually lead to a

cattastrophic

extremely harmful; bringing physical or financial ruin

catastrophic

catastrophe

diasters

Suggestion

disaster

disasters

distress

such

as; part of the

world

would be submerge under water; the polar ice caps will melt at a rapid rate releasing

toxis

of or relating to or caused by a toxin or poison

toxic

gases; Ozon layer depletion would result in more skin related dieses.

However

, we still have time major countries around the

world

have come together and signed

aggrements

the statement (oral or written) of an exchange of promises

agreements

agreement

such

as the "Paris climate

chage

cause to change; make different; cause a transformation

change

accord" thereby promising to reduce their carbon

foot print

a mark of a foot or shoe on a surface

footprint

Furthermore

, the

also

agreed to

trasform

subject to a mathematical transformation

transform

their energy sector into more eco-friendly by using renewable resources

such

as sun and wind.

However

, the buck does not stop here the rate at which we are damaging the

enviroment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

, we

can not

cannot

counter its effect just by letting the big

coorperration

a business firm whose articles of incorporation have been approved in some state

corporations

corporation

do all the work, it is vital for each individual to do his or her part and it all starts from our homes. Researchers have shown in their studies that a major contribution of plastic waste is

produce

Suggestion

produced

by our own kitchens. Government by imposing strict laws can curb the actions of

uinenthusiastic

having or showing great excitement and interest

enthusiastic

unenthusiastic

citizens and make

this

world

a healthy place to live in. In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that it is high time we wake up and smell the coffee; our beloved earth is on its

last

breath and the only way we can save it is to do our part,

moreover

stricter

eco

Suggestion

Eco

friendly regulation can be the motivating factor for many.

Wed Dec 18 2019

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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379 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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