Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recyle more of their waste?

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As the
world
Use synonyms
popullation
the people who inhabit a territory or state
population
reaches a staggering 7-billion the amount of waste which we daily produce has exponentially risen. It is a common site for the citizens of developing countries to notice
mountains
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the mountains
of garbage lying on the side of the road
of
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on
an interstate highway,
therefore
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lawmakers in these countries have proposed mandatory recycling even at a small scale level
such
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as individual homes. In
thios
denotes a person or thing
this
essay I would like to elaborate my views on
this
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proposal and explain why
such
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actions are imperative for our survival. The earth is changing rapidly, we have a drastic climate change seen
ubiqouesly
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. The reason behind
this
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is lack of human intervention when it comes to protecting the environment.
humans
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Humans
for their own petty gain have forsaken their future generations.
Nienty
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Ninety
-nine percentage of
scientis
a person with advanced knowledge of one or more sciences
scientist
belive
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believes
believe
believed
the climate change to be a fact - which would eventually lead to a
cattastrophic
extremely harmful; bringing physical or financial ruin
catastrophic
catastrophe
diasters
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disaster
disasters
distress
such
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as; part of the
world
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would be submerge under water; the polar ice caps will melt at a rapid rate releasing
toxis
of or relating to or caused by a toxin or poison
toxic
gases; Ozon layer depletion would result in more skin related dieses.
However
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, we still have time major countries around the
world
Use synonyms
have come together and signed
aggrements
the statement (oral or written) of an exchange of promises
agreements
agreement
such
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as the "Paris climate
chage
cause to change; make different; cause a transformation
change
accord" thereby promising to reduce their carbon
foot print
a mark of a foot or shoe on a surface
footprint
.
Furthermore
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, the
also
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agreed to
trasform
subject to a mathematical transformation
transform
their energy sector into more eco-friendly by using renewable resources
such
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as sun and wind.
However
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, the buck does not stop here the rate at which we are damaging the
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
, we
can not
can not
cannot
counter its effect just by letting the big
coorperration
a business firm whose articles of incorporation have been approved in some state
corporations
corporation
do all the work, it is vital for each individual to do his or her part and it all starts from our homes. Researchers have shown in their studies that a major contribution of plastic waste is
produce
Suggestion
produced
by our own kitchens. Government by imposing strict laws can curb the actions of
uinenthusiastic
having or showing great excitement and interest
enthusiastic
unenthusiastic
citizens and make
this
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world
Use synonyms
a healthy place to live in. In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that it is high time we wake up and smell the coffee; our beloved earth is on its
last
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breath and the only way we can save it is to do our part,
moreover
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stricter
eco
Suggestion
Eco
friendly regulation can be the motivating factor for many.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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