You stayed at your friend’s house when you attended a conference in Australia. Unfortunately, you left a large envelope with some important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: •thank your friend for the stay • describe where you left the envelope • ask him/her to return it to you by post
Dear Jay,
I hope that
this
letter finds you in the best of health and spirits. I’m writing to let you know that I’ve left some important documents in your room, but first of all, I’m very thankful for the support that you provided by letting me stay at your home during two-week
conference in your city. You and your family members are so hospitable, I can’t thank Add an article
a two-week
the two-week
enough
for the love and care you gave during my stay.
What is more, I’ve left a brown Correct pronoun usage
you enough
colored
Change the spelling
coloured
envelop
in the cupboard which is situated Replace the word
envelope
at
the corner of your room. I don’t remember exactly whether it’s in Change preposition
in
second
or third drawer. As the Add an article
the second
envelop
Replace the word
envelope
contain
my educational documents, which I brought as proof of eligibility to attend Correct subject-verb agreement
contains
conference
, their importance can’t be denied.
I would like to suggest that please send the said Add an article
the conference
a conference
envelop
by the International Courier service Replace the word
envelope
on
my home address which is mentioned on the Change preposition
to
envelop
. Don’t forget to send the tracking Replace the word
envelope
id
as it’s the only way to locate documents.
I will wait for your reply.
With best regards,
Sara KhanCorrect your spelling
ID
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
task response
The letter adequately addresses the main points of the task, expressing gratitude and requesting the return of the envelope.
coherence cohesion
The logical structure of the letter is somewhat disorganized and could be improved for clearer progression of ideas.
coherence cohesion
The use of greetings and closing expressions is appropriate, contributing to a polite and friendly tone. However, the coherence between paragraphs could be strengthened.
lexical resource
The letter demonstrates a sufficient range of vocabulary, with appropriate use of formal language where required.
grammatical range
There are some errors in the use of verb tenses and sentence structures. Proofreading can help in addressing these issues.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite