Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging of products?” Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.

We normally go to the markets to buy what we need.
However
, we might end up buying more than we really want. Sometimes, we don'
t
buy what is needed at all; we just buy what was offered in an attractive way to increase the urge to be bought. If you're asking "why is that?", the answer is simple. We have everything ready packaged in stan
derdized pac
brought into conformity with a standard
standardized
ks. We don'
t
have the option that allows us to decide the amount we really need. Now, we need to stop and think. How many times did we throw away things that went bad before we had a chance to use it? How many poor people were deprived of their share because we can afford to buy and throw away while they can'
t
? Do we have a role to change the situation? Who should we blame for that? Some people would blame the producers for preparing extra packaged products. They say that the consumers have no choice. What they have available is what these producers offer. The producers should do market research to check the peop
le nee
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person
person's
ds and provide them with the optimum options. Companies can produce different packaging sizes so whatever is needed is always avai
labe. Th
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
ese institutions are supposed to be competing to gain the cust
omers sat
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customer
customer's
isfaction. The leading companies should take the inti
ative and
readiness to embark on bold new ventures
initiative
stop over-packaging. What others think is that it is our role as consumers to refuse buying what we don'
t
really need. All what the producers really care about is brof
it, an
the excess of revenues over outlays in a given period of time (including depreciation and other non-cash expenses)
profit
d how to gain more money. Consumers should be aware of their own needs. Customers can Boycott the producers who are forcing them to buy more. We have the power and can control the market. All we need to do is some educational campaigns to show people the truth. Show them how these companies are tricking us usin
g mar
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use
are using
keting to persuade us to buy what we don'
t
really need. They can convince us to think that's what we need. If we keep believing all the adve
rtisments, we
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisements
will lose control over our lives soon. Thinking about all that, I think stoping over consumerism is a mutual work between both the consumers and the producers. But I believe that the consumers have more power to win
this
battle. Boycotting is a strong weapon that can force the companies to offer us what we need. Why would I pay for anything
that is
of no use. Why would I throw my money away for something that will end up in the garbage. The consumer should be wiser than following trends that only beni
fit the
financial assistance in time of need
benefit
producers. We
also
need to think that the consumer is not the only loser in
this
case; the whole society is going to pay for that mistake sooner or later.
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