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Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice?

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In the modern world, many people tend to purchase ready-made meals,
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 as fast food, junk food, and takeaway dishes. In
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 regard, they don’t cook at home regularly and often refuse to bake, boil and cook
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
 types of food for the relatives.
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 many individuals believe that
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 is a negative trend, personally, I believe that
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 trend has many advantages,
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 as spending
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 for other activities, concentrating on the study and watching the favourite TV programs. On the one hand, it is true that not preparing nutrition at home can be useful for spending
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 on other things. In
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 case, the housewives can do many other house works,
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 as washing, cleaning and reading.
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,
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 tendency
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 beneficial for the person who is career oriented.
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, these kinds of people can save their
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to
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develop
 their personal growth, interpersonal skills and communication.
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, they can dedicate their day for the relaxation.
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, not cooking can be expensive for the ordinary people, as many takeaways are costly. In
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 regard, some people prefer to cook.
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, the
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 advantage of
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 tendency is spending
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 with enjoyment.
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, many people can forget about their problems while they prepare a meal.
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, they can delight the people around them, as many individuals please to receive nourishment. In conclusion,
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 many individuals tend to think that buying ready-made foods is not beneficial for the people,
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, I believe that
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 tendency can save the
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.
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, consumers of these products can develop the small business of local communities.

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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