Some people are of the opinion that being highly qualified is the only way to ensure a well-paying job. While others believe that having work experience is the best way to get a well-paying job. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Most of them who believe that
existence
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the existence
of
well
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good
wellness
education is the lone method to have a guaranteed high paid job. Though
rest
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the rest
of them trust that hands-on practise is
the good
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the best
the better
mode to avail high paid profession.
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essay will
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discuss the both the views merits of having
high
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a high qualification
qualification
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.
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, the benefits of having
good amount
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a good amount
of work
experience
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and ends with
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a conclusion
the conclusion
conclusions
On the one hand, the basic education is the fundamental requirement to start the career. To exemplify, all recruiters as a talent acquisition team of
organization
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sets up a minimum
qualification
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requirement for each level of positions with
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the framework
.
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, they believe that who
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fulfils
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requirement only can survive in the professional life and has the potential to the challenging roles and responsibilities.
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, in a telecommunication company basic
qualification
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to get
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into
the
organization
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is
bachelor’s degree
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a bachelor’s degree
in communication field.
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, one having
large amount
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a large amount
of
experience
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always benefit to the working
organization
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. To demonstrate, highly skilled
personal
group of people willing to obey orders
personnel
can be placed
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into
production directly with spending very minimum amount additional cost and time on training and development.
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is Because every
organization
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has their own processes and procedures to complete a task.
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, in a network operating centre, job nature is to work for 7 days a week with round the clock, where major task to perform is to monitor the alarms of the equipment and raise fault tickets as required which needs more
experience
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than the
qualification
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. To conclude, every
organization
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looks for candidates has more
experience
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and giving
least priority
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less priority
to non-skilled
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persons, although they
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they are highly qualified. Most of the educational centres are now transforming towards developing candidates based on the specific skill set required in the market and
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, I agree that
experience
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will get highly paid jobs. But in my opinion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Highly qualified
  • Well-paying job
  • Securing
  • Knowledge
  • Expertise
  • Higher positions
  • Higher salaries
  • Practical skills
  • Real-world setting
  • Employers value
  • Professional connections
  • Ideal
  • Industry
  • Job role
  • Opinion
  • Experience
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