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The number of people suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people believe that alternative medicine can help. Do you agree that alternative medicines are effective?

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These days, people are falling ill due to
change
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changes
 in
way
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the way
 of life and
this
 cannot be diagnosed by latest drugs. There are many who
believes
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believe
different method
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a different method
 of remedies can help. I agree with the statement.
This
 essay will
first
 discuss, how latest drugs cannot support for permanent cure and
secondly
 discuss, the side effects caused by it can be overcome by the different methods of treatment (
causes
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cause
 side effect that can overcome by the different method of treatment)
To begin
 with, people in
developed environment
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the developed environment
developed environments
 changing their traditional way of living to
current situation
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the current situation
current situations
.
This
 includes food habits, culture, sleeping timings etc.
people
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People
 are consuming lot of junk foods and having late night sleep due to overseas projects, which increase cholesterol,
diabetic
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diabetes
 and kidney problems. Medicines have to take
for
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in
 the whole life to keep
this
 illness under control and do not have a permanent cure.
For example
, diabetic patients have to take medicine or insulin to keep the sugar level under control for their whole life
In addition
 to the above, taking modern medicines for
long time
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a long time
 can cause other problems to health as a side
effects
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effect
 which will reduce basic self-immune power of the human body.
For example
, when consuming antibiotic for continuous fever or cold will damage both bad cells and good cells – (need to give more explanation) In conclusion, owing to the fast growing development people are facing multiple problems. To diagnose and
treating
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treat
 all health
issue
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issues
 without any cause of additional problem and to have a permanent cure an alternate method is needed. I
thus
 entirely agree with the statement
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