Modern technology is now very common in the most workplaces. How do you think this has changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?

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MANY REVOLUTION HAPPENING IN

THIS

CONTEMPORARY WORLD.

HENCE

THIS

MADE EASY AVAILABILITY OF THE NEWER EQUIPMENT THAT HAS REDUCED THE HUMAN WORK LOAD BY ANY MEAN.

FIRSTLY

THIS

EASY WILL DISCUSS HOW IT HAS MADE FAST PACE LIFE MORE EFFORTLESS AND

SECONDLY

, THE PRIME CONS BEHIND USING MODERN EQUIPMENT. ON THE ONE HAND, TODAY'S WAY OF WORKING IN ANY FIELD IS EFFORTLESS AS SINGLE MACHINE CAN ABLE TO DO 10 PEOPLE WORK WHICH WASIMPOSSIBLE DECADE AGO.

FOR EXAMPLE

, ONE COMPUTER COULD ABLE TO STORE ENORMOUS AMOUNT OF DATA IN IT WHICH CAN BE ACCESSIBLE AFTER A YEARS

ALSO

THUS

THIS

HAS DECLINED THE REQUIREMENT OF HAVING A PHYSICAL FORM OF STORAGE DEVICE LIKE PEN DRIVE.

ON THE OTHER HAND

, OVER USE OF MACHINE ABLE TO CAUSE VARIOUS HEALTH ISSUES

SUCH

AS OBESITY, HEART DISEASES, JOINT PROBLEMS AND SO ON. OWNING TO THE FACT THAT WHEN USE MACHIN FPR OUR REGYLAR WORK, WE HAVE PLENTY OF TIME TO RELAX AND REST.

AS A RESULT

, OVERDOING

THIS

MAKE THEM ILL PERSON IN A LONG TERM DUE TO LACK OF PHYSICAL ACTIVITY.

FOR INSTANCE

, BRITAN HOUSEHOLD SURVEY REVEALED THAT 80% OF THE CHORES HAVE BENN COMPLETING WITH THE MACHINES LIKE WAHSER, DRYER AND MOPPING THE FLOOR.

THEREFORE

, 70% OF ENGLAND WOMEN TEND TO HAVE

THIS

PROBLEM IN COMPARISON TO MEN. WHAT I BELIEVE IS THAT EVERY EQUIPMENT IS CONFERTABLE AND OPERATED BUT ONE SHOULD THINK ABOUT THE CONSEQUENCE FO USING IT WHEN NOT NECESSARY TO DO SO. IN CONCLUSION, TECHNOLOGY INDEED DECREASED THE NUMEROUS WORK LOAD FOR EVERYBODY,

HOWEVER

, THERE ARE SOME SERIOUS CONS ASSOCIALTED WITH THE TECHNOLOGY WHICH SHOULD BE IN CONSIDERATION WHILE USING.

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Modern technology is now very common in the most workplaces. How do you think this has changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?

Fully explain your ideas

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should human adapt to technology or should technology be adapted to us? Is technology making us intellectually weaker or more intelligent? Discuss both views and give your point.

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some people said professionals such as doctors or engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training while other said they should be free to work in another country

Many people today find that the cost of attaining a University-level education is extremely high for the students and their families. What are the causes of this situation, and how can governments, Universities and the students themselves overcome the problem?