WRITING TASK 1 Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear Mrs boss I have received your letter regarding
complaint
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the complaint
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about the disturbance from my house.
Firstly
i
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I
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am really apologies
about
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for
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disturbance
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the disturbance
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created by my family.
Actully
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Actually
my sister's family recently moved to my house from Canada for a month one of her
son
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sons
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is sick due to fever .he is keep on
screeming
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screaming
and crying even we take him to the hospital but
infortunatly
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unfortunately
no progress. I am really feeling sad when
i
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I
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received your letter
also
i
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I
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am feeling shame about it .As living in your neighbour we never received any complaint regarding my family but due to the illness of my
nephew
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,nephew
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this
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these
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things happen.
i
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I
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am feeling glad to say that now his health is better
then
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than
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before after taking medication.He is feeling better now.
i
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I
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will take care of
this kinds
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this kind
these kinds
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of disturbance will not happen in future
thanks
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tothanks
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your faithfully
amrit
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Amrit
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