Crime rate, in most countries, is often higher than in urban areas than in rural areas. Why do you think that is? What can be done to reduce the crime rate?

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The majority of the nations are suffering with offences in cities rather than in villages, Because of the unemployment, illiteracy and more population. Of Course, nations have solutions to reduce

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felony rate. As my opinion, giving the awareness to the public about the consequences of the destruction and importance of the family by conducting the counsels or meetings.

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, most of the administrations are failing to give the employment and good education to the public, Due to that wrongdoings are increasing in cities.

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, family members are

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not giving the right directions to their children because of their poorness.

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, our country is in

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place in population. So, giving free education and employment to everyone is not possible because of that rapists, thefts and so on are increasing day by day in cities in our country. So, by conducting the counsellings to the public and giving the support to them by the regime most of the crime rate will be reduced.

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, In the countryside the people are so sentimental that means the affection, love and most of the emotions will come between the relatives. So, any problems will come between them, they will only get solved. In Conclusion, In my point of view, every nation suffering with

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problem, But for every problem there is a solution. So, for

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problem is

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we have so many solutions, but it is important to apply that. When the countries will come forward to take daring decisions to apply,

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only breach rates will completely eradicate.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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4 paragraphs

259 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

anonymity
social cohesion
socioeconomic disparities
desperation
urban stressors
mental health
community policing
job opportunities
poverty
inequality
public spaces
surveillance cameras
deterrent
recidivism
reintegration programs

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