The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think that this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent
language
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in the
world
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as communication plays an important role in our daily to express our thinking and
interact
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interactions
interaction
with people. English trends to be the only
language
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to be spoken globally. There are some advantages and disadvantages to having one
langugage
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
languages
in the
world
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. Sharing the same
language
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in the
world
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will benefit on communication and understanding in many
ares
a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)
areas
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as economic, education, medical and other. It opens the door to more opportunities and profits. More agreement between two parties can be achieved
as misunderstanding
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as a misunderstanding
can be avoided.
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, there is no border for educators, scientists or researchers in knowledge sharing as
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an idea
and gen can be transferred widely without
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barrier and indirectly
enchance
increase
enhance
the innovation.
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, only speaking
global
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the global language
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could be a threat to each ethnic's mother tongue as
native
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a native language
language
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is abandoned. English will be the must learn
language
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in school as many believe that it open the door to the
world
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. New generation trends to learn English and abandons their native
language
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. As the result, native
language
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is not be used
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is not used
isn't used
does not use
doesn't use
in daily conversation.
This
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was proven by the youth
Chinese Filipino
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Chinese, Filipino
or Chinese Singaporean who can't speak Chinese as fluently as English. The
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consisting of or derived from tradition
traditional
cultural
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culture
and history will be forgotten as well. To conclude, only using a global
language
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can be a threat if we are not giving priority to master own native
language
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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