Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers .do you agree or disagree.

The gift can be a monetary or non-monetary thing which we give someone to show our gratitude, love and care. As some person finds the monetary presents are appealing and
on the other hand
, some people find that non-monetary gifts are appealing. It is assumed that
money
is the best temptation for the teenagers, but I completely disagree with the assumption. In
this
essay we will discuss, why monetary presents are not the best one for the youngsters.
Although
it is believed that, teenagers prefer
money
when someone is gifting anything to them, but
money
cannot create memories. Like if parents is going to give only
money
to their children on their birthdays, when the children become adult, they do not have any memory i
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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