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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Avoiding
change
 of
life
 and repeat doing the same things is a good way to keep the happiness of
memory
, but changing to a new good thing is better because changing can let you grow up (your physically and mind) and it can delete some of sad
memory
. The
first
 reason for changing of
life
 is growing of thinking and the physical body. People
change
 their mindset and open their world when they
change
 their place
such
 as travelling, moving home, and changing their job. They will meet other people who have different opinions, and they will learn new things from others. Mr.
Mee
Suggestion
Me
,
for example
, he is an investor in my country. He always goes abroad for meeting new people to exchange his investment experience, and he
also
 gets new idea or strategy for investing from them. If people stay in the same place, they will not have a new idea or friend. The
second
 reason is changing of time will remove a bad
memory
. Most of people have an unpleasant situation in their
life
,
such
 as when someone died. The forgetting some sad
memory
 is better than clear memorise since they will not repeat their sadness again and again. For instant, when my grandmother died, I need to keep our happy
memory
 more than the
last
 time with her. I just miss her and commit to be a good grandmother like her in the future. Granted, doing same situation is the good things since it can keep the old happiness, but changing is better because it can bring another happy
memory
. People cannot find a new happiness If people only do the same things, live in the same place, and chat with the same person. Moving out of the comfort zone is the things that they have to do and they cannot avoid changing if they live if the world that there are changing many things all time. In conclusion, I prefer to
change
 because it brings me to a good new experience for improving my
life
 and I do not want to stay in a bad
memory
.
Although
 unchanging can keep a good
memory
, I
also
 need a new
memory
 for my
life
.

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