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Some people believe that men and women are equal so women should be able to do any job they want others feel that women and men are not equal therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women

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Gender discrimination is quite a popular topic to discuss in
this
 decade.
Although
, both genders are equivalent to some people so that there is no professional distinction between them while others assume that there must be
job
 segregation between men and women.
This
 essay will discuss how women's social commitments and social responsibilities make them incompatible to certain professions. Women have many social responsibilities so that they cannot fulfil those regulations as compared to men.
Such
 as, married women cannot travel freely because of their family problems due to which women are mostly, reluctant to do a
job
 which requires extensive travelling.
For example
, according to the DAWN newspaper, 60% of female doctors quit the
job
 after getting married.
Therefore
, women need to be compatible with the current environment Mostly. Due to women, physical nature women are reluctant to do a tough
job
 because of physical fitness women cannot perform tasks like men.
For instance
, In Army women are not allowed to perform duties on f
rontlines.
Suggestion
the Frontlines
Frontlines
front lines
In a
ddition according
Accept comma addition
addition, according
to HAARETZ newspaper, women selected for NAVY mission could not survive hard training so she had been admitted to hospital. There are places where women are not equal to men. According to some women cannot distinguish from men in any profession whereas others refrain from having a point of view about gender equality. Due to social responsibilities and physical tendencies women are reluctant to join some professions.
Consequently
, Women must improve their compatibilities to match men in every walk of life.

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