Some people believe that universities are producing more graduates than is needed, and that less emphasis should be placed on university education. Others are of a different opinion. Discuss both views and include your opinion.
In the current competitive world, Unemployment is a major crisis, several demographics are now going through. There is a debate on
Use synonyms
number
of students being Suggestion
the number
graduted
from universities should be curtailed, but marked with or divided into degrees
graduated
graduate
on the other hand
, some people believe that, there is no reason to contain Linking Words
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number
of graduates passing out each year. Reducing Suggestion
the number
a number
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number
of students in the universities will increase illiterates, which would be catastrophic as discussed in the following essay.
Education is imperative to every individual. With the ongoing population, There should always be enough Suggestion
the number
oppurtunities
for the people to get acquainted with the necessary knowledge, in order to survive in their future. Without the appropriate support from universities and lecturers, students cannot be successful all time. Government should always keep a tab on increasing population and optimize a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
opportunity
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number
of slots in the Suggestion
the number
unversities
the body of faculty and students at a university
universities
university
accordingly
. In the modern Linking Words
automted
world, There is a constant scope for innovations and enormous job operated by automation
automated
oppurtunities
.
Universities rather than concentrating too much on a particular field, should consider all the streams equally and provide a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
ample
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an ample number
number
of Use synonyms
oppurtinities
for the a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
stundents
to be educated. For an instance, Engineering has various streams, but universities are only keen on Computer Engineering, since the current job market is demanding many IT employees. a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution
students
student
This
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phoenemena
will just increase expertise only in any state or process known through the senses rather than by intuition or reasoning
phenomenon
phenomena
partcular field
, whereas other areas are completely sidelined. Universities and Students should Suggestion
a particular field
particular field
particular fields
particulars field
the particular field
also
explore various options, participate in different streams and come up with innovations to maximize job Linking Words
oppurtunities
in all the fields
In my opinion, current world is highly challenging. In order to be successful, every individual should be willing to explore new options and accomplish a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
innvoations
in their domain of work. For a creation (a new device or process) resulting from study and experimentation
innovations
innovation
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this
to happen, Linking Words
Government
should always be Suggestion
the government
the Government
considering
raging population and take proper measures to create sufficient educational Suggestion
considered
oppurtunities
for the students. Education has to be a right a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
opportunity
instead
of a privilege and it's totally Linking Words
upto
to the Suggestion
stundents
, on how they will a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution
students
untilize
the put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose
utilize
oppurtunity
and maximize their chances of being stupendous.a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
opportunities
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