Many crimes are often related to the consumption of alcohol. Some people think that the best way to reduce the crime rate is to ban alcohol. Do you think this is an effective measure against crime? What other solutions can you suggest?

Most of the time the criminals are drunk while committing the

crime

and some people believe that the main

solution

for preventing the

crime

commitment is

alcohol

prohibition. I completely disagree with

this

view, because of a major reason which I will discuss in the following paragraph, and

then

debate what the effective solutions are.

H

owever

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However, alcohol

alcohol

consuming would affect on committing the

crime

, forbidden the

alcohol

is not the best

solution

f

or

Suggestion

to

decrease the rate of the

crime

. Because in that case people drunk in their privacy and as the result of that disobedience take place.

Moreover

,

alcohol

is imported by t

rafficker;

Suggestion

traffickers

the trafficker

so, another

crime

happened.

For instance

, In Iran, the rule of

alcohol

prohibition exists, but the hidden bar made up and the covert drunk people spread out in the whole country, but, still the

crime

committed by drunken criminals and the increasing rate of

alcohol

trafficker become another problem which police and governments are struggling with. So ban the

alcohol

might not solve the increasing rate of the

crime

problem. The

solution

of reduction of

alcohol

consumption in order to reduce the

crime

commitment needs parents and g

overnments

Suggestion

government's

government

attention.

First

of all, parents should control their children to not drink

alcohol

before 18;

besides

, they should not consume

alcohol

obviously and openly in front of their children's eyes. The Government should improve the educational goals and teach the younger generation how

alcohol

would be h

armful especially

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harmful, especially

for their health and the safety of the society. In conclusion, some people consider that, ban the

alcohol

absolutely reduce the

crime

commitment because most of the crimes committed by drunken criminals. We debate the views and

solution

above.