Many crimes are often related to the consumption of alcohol. Some people think that the best way to reduce the crime rate is to ban alcohol. Do you think this is an effective measure against crime? What other solutions can you suggest?

Most of the time the criminals are drunk while committing the

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and some people believe that the main

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for preventing the

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commitment is

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prohibition. I completely disagree with

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view, because of a major reason which I will discuss in the following paragraph, and

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debate what the effective solutions are.

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However, alcohol

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consuming would affect on committing the

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, forbidden the

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is not the best

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decrease the rate of the

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. Because in that case people drunk in their privacy and as the result of that disobedience take place.

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,

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is imported by t

rafficker;

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traffickers

the trafficker

so, another

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happened.

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, In Iran, the rule of

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prohibition exists, but the hidden bar made up and the covert drunk people spread out in the whole country, but, still the

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committed by drunken criminals and the increasing rate of

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trafficker become another problem which police and governments are struggling with. So ban the

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might not solve the increasing rate of the

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problem. The

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of reduction of

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consumption in order to reduce the

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commitment needs parents and g

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government's

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attention.

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of all, parents should control their children to not drink

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before 18;

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, they should not consume

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obviously and openly in front of their children's eyes. The Government should improve the educational goals and teach the younger generation how

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would be h

armful especially

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harmful, especially

for their health and the safety of the society. In conclusion, some people consider that, ban the

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absolutely reduce the

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commitment because most of the crimes committed by drunken criminals. We debate the views and

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above.