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Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Presently all
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country’s
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countries are
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 suffering from glitches of
poverty
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 and they are making an effort to overcome with dissimilar methods.
Main
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 cause of
global
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the global
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 deprived condition is illiteracy and unemployment. To deal with
these
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this situation country
these situation countries
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situation
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situations
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country
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 need to provide Better
education
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facility
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facilities
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 and create job
opportunity
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opportunities
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.
This
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 essay will discuss some of the reasons
of
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for
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poverty
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 and provide solutions to help.
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 recent
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researches
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researches,
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 it is been stated that developing
countries
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suffering
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suffer
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 from
poverty
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,
although
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 people living
under
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apply
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below
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poverty
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the poverty
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 line
also
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, Because of
lack
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a lack
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 of
education
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 and unemployment. For illustration In Africa, WHO educating number of population, by organizing
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a volunteering
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 program. And
while
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 in some
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country
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countries
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literacy
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the literacy
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 rate is high,
but
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apply
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due to
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 lack of
employment
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country
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 is still
lacking
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lagging
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 behind in terms of economic development. To support
burden
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the burden
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 of
poverty
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countries
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 should amend
policy
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policies
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 like providing free
education
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 and increasing
employment
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. So that people can acquire daily wages and
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country
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the country
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risen
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rise
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 up from
this
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 profanity.
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, Some
countries
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 provide free
education
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 up to
secondary
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the secondary
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 level and
establishing
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establish
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 apparel training
centers
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centres
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 for people to learn and create their own
employment
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 in
small scale
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small-scale
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 sectors.
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,
Poverty
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 is a threat to developing
countries
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, many
nation
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nations
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stated
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started
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 to control
this
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 hazard. In
this
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essay
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essay,
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 we have discussed
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the
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cause of
poverty
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 and
solution
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solutions
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 to amend.
Poverty
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 is a slow poison, It will
eradicate
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 when
population
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the population
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 is educated and
get
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gets
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employment
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 to survive.

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Stick to this essay structure:

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  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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