Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Presently all
country’s
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countries are
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suffering from glitches of
poverty
and they are making an effort to overcome with dissimilar methods.
Main
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cause of
global
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the global
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deprived condition is illiteracy and unemployment. To deal with
these
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this situation country
these situation countries
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situation
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situations
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country
need to provide Better
education
facility
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facilities
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and create job
opportunity
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opportunities
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.
This
essay will discuss some of the reasons
of
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for
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poverty
and provide solutions to help.
According to
recent
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researches
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it is been stated that developing
countries
suffering
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suffer
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from
poverty
,
although
people living
under
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apply
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below
poverty
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the poverty
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line
also
, Because of
lack
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a lack
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of
education
and unemployment. For illustration In Africa, WHO educating number of population, by organizing
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a volunteering
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program. And
while
in some
country
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countries
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literacy
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the literacy
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rate is high,
but
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apply
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due to
lack of
employment
country
is still
lacking
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lagging
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behind in terms of economic development. To support
burden
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the burden
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of
poverty
countries
should amend
policy
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policies
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like providing free
education
and increasing
employment
. So that people can acquire daily wages and
country
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the country
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risen
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rise
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up from
this
profanity.
For instance
, Some
countries
provide free
education
up to
secondary
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the secondary
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level and
establishing
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establish
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apparel training
centers
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centres
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for people to learn and create their own
employment
in
small scale
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sectors.
To conclude
,
Poverty
is a threat to developing
countries
, many
nation
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nations
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stated
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started
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to control
this
hazard. In
this
essay
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essay,
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we have discussed
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the
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cause of
poverty
and
solution
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solutions
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to amend.
Poverty
is a slow poison, It will
eradicate
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be eradicated
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when
population
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the population
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is educated and
get
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gets
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employment
to survive.

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