Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and hunger. Others say that economic growth is causing damage to the environment and should be stopped now. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is the viewpoint of some people that the only method to end world
poverty
and starvation is to encourage economic
devolpment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
, while others think that the risk to the
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
outweighs that benefit and that economic growth should be ceased. I will
disscuss
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discuss
both opinions and give mine. There is no doubt that
poverty
and hunger and linked, and a logical approach to ending
poverty
is through economic
devolpment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
, with better access to resources,
people' economic situation
Suggestion
the people ' economic situation
improves in a number of
diffrent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
ways. With more money, people start having a more balanced diet, dealing with the
malnutrion
a state of poor nutrition; can result from insufficient or excessive or unbalanced diet or from inability to absorb foods
malnutrition
and multiple deficiencies in impoverished areas.
with
Suggestion
With
better
nutrion
(physiology) the organic process of nourishing or being nourished; the processes by which an organism assimilates food and uses it for growth and maintenance
nutrition
people become more able physically and mentally. With people becoming better fed, they start focusing on other needs and improving their quality of life, one method to achieve
this
is through education, which
then
enables them to get better jobs, stimulating the local economy.
However
,
this
effects
have an effect upon
affects
another important part of peoples' life, which is the
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
around them, some people are willing to sacrifice it for their financial benefit,
deforastation
the state of being clear of trees
deforestation
and pollution comes to mind, but not all economic growth is harmful to the
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
. There are
diffrent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
methods to achieve both
devolpment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
and preserve the
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
Including the recycling industry and sustainable power production. In conclusion, economic growth is an important way to deal with world
poverty
and starvation and improving peoples' quality of life as long as it is done in a way that preserve the
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
around us, there is no point in improving our living conditions if
everythin
all things
everything
everyone
around can't survive.
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