The graphs indicate the source of complaints about the Bank of America and the amount of time it takes to have the complaints resolved. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The pie
chart
illustrates the percentage of complaints about the Bank of America in seven different categories, while
the bar chart
depicts the average time required to solve complaints from Investigation Data to Final Action.
Overall
, it is immediately apparent that the highest proportion of the
dissatisfaction made by Correct article usage
apply
public
. It can Add an article
the public
also
be seen that the average time taken by
Change preposition
to
investigation
and Replace the word
investigating
solve
the cases Wrong verb form
solving
was
from 3 to 6 months.
Change the verb form
were
According to
the pie chart
, the highest percentage of dissatisfaction was reported by the public more than 60%, while
the government agencies made complains
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complaints
just
over 11%. Change preposition
of just
Moreover
, 8% objections
came from Insurance companies. Change preposition
of objections
While
the Bank employees and Media figured equally 3 percent
in the Change the spelling
per cent
chart
, the lowest ratio of complaints reported by out of state
entities Add a hyphen
out-of-state
about
2%. Add a missing verb
was about
Additionally
, the rest proportion came from other resources.
As a
regard Remove the article
apply
to
the bar Change preposition
apply
chart
, the Bank required 6 months to tackle the objections in 2001, a month higher than 2000
. Change preposition
in 2000
In contrast
, in the next
three years approximately 4 months needed
to provide suitable solutions to tackle them.Add a missing verb
are needed
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