Some people believe that it’s not necessary to have internet access to live a full life. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.

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It is often argued by a small group of people that it is not required to have

accesibility

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access

accessibility

internet

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the internet

to live a complete life. In my opinion, I totally agree with

this

and believe that online network is not needed to be happy in life.

First

of all, a lot of things can be provided without the help of

this

development. The reason for

this

is that the web is a tool to make the daily

routine reliable

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routine, reliable

but it's not

neccessary

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necessarily

necessary

an important part of our time.

For instance

, these days all academic institutes are making use of

this

approach, with the thought to bring the message quickly to the pupils. So,

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

114 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

essential services
remote work
freelancing platforms
real-time information
social media
online resources
continuous learning
streaming services
digital books
job opportunities
educational opportunities
modern communication
traditional media
real-time updates
informed decisions
internet access
social dynamics
digital divide
personal growth
global connectivity

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Include an introduction and conclusion

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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