Some people believe that it’s not necessary to have internet access to live a full life. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.

It is often argued by a small group of people that it is not required to have
accesibility
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access
accessibility
to
internet
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the internet
to live a complete life. In my opinion, I totally agree with
this
and believe that online network is not needed to be happy in life.
First
of all, a lot of things can be provided without the help of
this
development. The reason for
this
is that the web is a tool to make the daily
routine reliable
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routine, reliable
but it's not
neccessary
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necessarily
necessary
an important part of our time.
For instance
, these days all academic institutes are making use of
this
approach, with the thought to bring the message quickly to the pupils. So,

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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