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should a nation invest in transportation? discuss both views ans express an opinion

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Whether a nation needs to invest in transportation or shouldn't for the same which are
depends
Suggestion
depending
 on some affecting factors discussed as below.
Firstly
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, there are so many necessaries to enhance
survivability
Suggestion
 of transport for transporting goods from one place to another place, people need to visit some places, to
developing
Suggestion
develop
 relations between nations
,
Accept space
,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
. As an example,
a men
expression used at the end of prayers, meaning So be it
amen
 lives
in particular
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 nation who doesn't have private vehicle needs to use public
tansport
move something or somebody around; usually over long distances
transport
 for going somewhere.
Secondly
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, the term "transport" includes some structural aspects
also
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,
such
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 as, building roads, pathways, tunnels which are
usedful
being of use or service
useful
 to transport through under the mountains, bridges and air transportation, etc.
As
Accept comma addition
As, for
for example
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, if the road is not connectable between origin and destination where people need to visit. As per my perspective, it is necessary for
nation
Suggestion
a nation
nations
the nation
 to develop transportation through investing in it because it provides mobility to people and goods
also
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.

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