It is becoming increasingly popular for people to travel to tourist destinations during public holidays. What problems does this cause? What solutions are there to these problems?

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Today's life is full of

stress which

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stress, which

leads people to crave for recreation which has boosted tourism in

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decade.

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travel

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has numerous benefits on a person and his relationships as whole

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it certainly has some drawbacks. We shall discuss some problems caused due to a specific

travel

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period window of Public holidays and what solutions can be implemented to overcome the same.

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, major problem

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caused due to the specific time of

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is that the place becomes extremely overcrowded and

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doesnot

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does not

give

fullfledged

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full fledged

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experience.

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, during

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the month

of April and May in which major schools have vacations in India there are more than 50,000 travellers to Ladakh which is 2 times to its Population.

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makes the place highly overcrowded because a place which has a population of 25000 gets

double number

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a double number

of tourists making it difficult for locals to provide a good

holiday

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experience. The only solution to

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is to limit the number of travellers to

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kind of destinations in order to get the best of both the worlds.

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major

hindrence

something immaterial that interferes with or delays action or progress

hindrance

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imbalance

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an imbalance

of the income cycle of locals of tourist places. What I mean is if there is a particular window of

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people who are solely dependent on tourism as their income would not get their living round the

year

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. Instantiating

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A owner of the hotel in Goa has 24 rooms inventory to sell. During peak period he has his full capacity sold

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the period of a 4 months in a

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The rest

of the

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month

he is not getting even 50% of the total inventory taken up.

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caused due to an imbalanced cycle business apparently causing other personal as well as professional problems to hundreds of thousands of

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kind of people. The solution to

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can be

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provided

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gaps in a

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year but

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year, but

of shorter length

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of 2 long holidays in a

year

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. In inference, travelling during public holidays causes particular places overcrowded and special dates and months makes an imbalanced income cycle on the other side. Limiting the entry of some places to

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and should make larger

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frames in an annum.

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Prediction or recommendation

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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367 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

overcrowding
increased prices
environmental damage
traffic congestion
safety concerns
cultural degradation
limited availability
waiting lines
tourist attractions
conflict
local residents

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It is becoming increasingly popular for people to travel to tourist destinations during public holidays. What problems does this cause? What solutions are there to these problems?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people suggest that a country should try to produce all the food for its population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others believe that there are better ways to show that we care about them. *Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views!

Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communication have a negative impact on young people’s writing and reading skills. Do you agree or disagree?