It is becoming increasingly popular for people to travel to tourist destinations during public holidays. What problems does this cause? What solutions are there to these problems?

Today's life is full of
stress which
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stress, which
leads people to crave for recreation which has boosted tourism in
this
decade.
Although
travel
has numerous benefits on a person and his relationships as whole
,
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,
it certainly has some drawbacks. We shall discuss some problems caused due to a specific
travel
period window of Public holidays and what solutions can be implemented to overcome the same.
Firstly
, major problem
that is
caused due to the specific time of
travel
is that the place becomes extremely overcrowded and
thus
doesnot
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does not
give
fullfledged
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full fledged
holiday
experience.
For example
, during
month
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the month
of April and May in which major schools have vacations in India there are more than 50,000 travellers to Ladakh which is 2 times to its Population.
This
makes the place highly overcrowded because a place which has a population of 25000 gets
double number
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a double number
of tourists making it difficult for locals to provide a good
holiday
experience. The only solution to
this
is to limit the number of travellers to
this
kind of destinations in order to get the best of both the worlds.
Second
major
hindrence
something immaterial that interferes with or delays action or progress
hindrance
hindrances
is
imbalance
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an imbalance
of the income cycle of locals of tourist places. What I mean is if there is a particular window of
travel
people who are solely dependent on tourism as their income would not get their living round the
year
. Instantiating
this
A owner of the hotel in Goa has 24 rooms inventory to sell. During peak period he has his full capacity sold
that is
the period of a 4 months in a
year
.
Rest
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The rest
of the
months
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month
he is not getting even 50% of the total inventory taken up.
This
caused due to an imbalanced cycle business apparently causing other personal as well as professional problems to hundreds of thousands of
such
kind of people. The solution to
this
can be
providing
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provided
more
holiday
gaps in a
year but
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year, but
of shorter length
instead
of 2 long holidays in a
year
. In inference, travelling during public holidays causes particular places overcrowded and special dates and months makes an imbalanced income cycle on the other side. Limiting the entry of some places to
cobat
an engagement fought between two military forces
combat
crowdyness
and should make larger
holiday
frames in an annum.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overcrowding
  • increased prices
  • environmental damage
  • traffic congestion
  • safety concerns
  • cultural degradation
  • limited availability
  • waiting lines
  • tourist attractions
  • conflict
  • local residents
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