Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extend do you agree …

One of the most challenging hot issues which has recently considered by a group of people is about the amount of

money

which spend on

arts

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the arts

by the

government

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It is

common

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commonly

argued that the

expenditure

which spend in

this

area is basically

waste

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a waste

of

money

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While others believe that it is a pessimistic view and arts play

key role

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a key role

in

culture

and traditional spotlights.In my opinion

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I believed that

although

we should care about

money

expenditure

in all fields, overall arts should not be ignored by

government

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As long as we know,

arts

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the arts

play a critical role in people’s life.There are

vast majority

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a vast majority

of

art

’s fans among the world.A group of people mentioned two essential

reason

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reasons

to prove

to

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of

importance of

arts

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the arts

.The primary important reason is about

culture

and

traditional concept

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traditional concepts

.They assume that, in a society with even

urban appearance

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the urban appearance

,

art

show the depth of our

culture

and integrity of that with our traditional history.

For instance

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Egypt which

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Egypt, which

is one of the ancient country in the world bring lots of visitors to annually which can show the power

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arts.

Moreover

, They assume that, people have constantly been the fan of

art

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Although

, they may concern about

money

expenditure

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expended

in

this

criteria but

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criteria, but

they are more interested to expand it as much as they can.

For example

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In China people donate 10 $ In a year to

government

to intensify the development of

arts

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the arts

in order to maintain their interesting history.

However

, there are

also

negative ideas which should be considered.A group of people

illustrate

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illustrates

two essential reasons.The

first

issue is that

government

should obtain priority about

money

expenditure

.

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means that by having various problems in

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society, government

government

should know their preferences.

For instance

, global warming has been one of the recent issues which

government

do not consider

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does not consider

it.

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They argue that

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global warming is much more important than

arts

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the arts

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Secondly

.They say that by investing

money

in others field

government

can earn more

money

due to better convenience for

there

of them or themselves

their

people. In conclusion, while

money

spending in

art

category

have

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has

a high cost

for

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of

government

, they can

also

be beneficial for people and their

culture

.In my opinion, despite having some adverse effects of spending

money

in

art

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I believe that

art

is

a

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an

initial rout of our

culture

and must be kept by

government

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the government

.