Some people think that girls should take husband’s name after marriage while others feel that they should not follow this age old tradition. What is your opinion?

The public seem in a real dilemma on whether possessing another half
's
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half's
name
once they live together for their whole life is mandatory to continue by appreciating conv
entianal role or
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the conventional role
conventional role
it is n
ot ne
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is not
cessary in these days.Acquiring hus
bands
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the husband's name
name
will virtually turn over a new leaf on the whole society by not turning a blind eye into
tradition
and helping people to recognise their status even though it might be create long
name
.In order to arrive
last
but not least consideration, I will mull both aspects over as follows like the coin flips over two side
.
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sides
In terms of not possessing husb
and's
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a husband's name
name
which is one of the component part
of
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parts
the society,it
c
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,
ould help girls and mother to not hesitate with their
name
by living with their child's father.In which meant they dono
t hav
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do not
e to write down their
name
with full of long names and their
name
might be more
easier to
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easier
easiest
more easy
call.According to the recent investigation, the most of the young indi
viduals especially inf
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individuals, especially
ant student of school confront issues as they have to introduce themselves to their counterparts by saying and writing their long
name
.Despite
this
,not
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,
purs
ueing tra
following in order to overtake or capture or as accompaniment to such pursuit
pursuing
d
itional approach of
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a traditional approach
the traditional approach
traditional approaches
naming will force the public to acquire humble memory. With regards to the conv
entional
following accepted customs and proprieties
conventional
name
granting
tradition
which have been followed for the thousands of centuries, anti
que nameing style is
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the antique naming style
antique naming style
not only intended to educate their children with good remembering skill but
also
proposed to respect
tradition
and history.To cite my mother as an example, when she was a young beautiful girl,she
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,
have to take my father's
name
by throwing away her
name
.
Moreover
,she
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,
was overly nervous about that and did a some research in order to grasp genu
ine truth.
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the genuine truth
Subsequently
,on
ce
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,
she realised that she receive a blissful honour ,my
m
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,
om
hav
e never refused to grant his
name
be respecting their pros
tigious his
having an illustrious reputation; respected
prestigious
tory and honour. Taking everything into conclusion,pur
s
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,
uing the conv
entional way
following accepted customs and proprieties
conventional
of naming and respecting
tradition
by not burying a he
ad int
at or in the front
ahead
o the sand help people to realise the value of history as well as honour seeing that not granting the
name
by avoiding the long
name
affects adversely to the juveniles skill of memo
rise alo
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memorization
ng with demolishing the value of
tradition
.

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