Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Learning is a process to obtain knowledge at every age of one's life.

Although

people believe that engaging their children in structured peer activities in a

liesure

time available for ease and relaxation

leisure

lesser

lazier

time would be beneficial for growth and development of the children. While

on the other

hand some

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hand, some

people argue that it is significant for children to learn how to present yourself to others.

To begin

with, there are various process of being in

a

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an

arranged group activities

such

as,

first

and

foremost it

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foremost, it

helps to boost children confidence level and self esteem.

For instance

, playing Soccer game is required teamwork and the leadership to make a goal. Through building coordination could lead the team towards success.

Secondly

, being in the similar age children don't afraid to speak up.

Thus

, learning gives strength and assist them to learn the just of childhood

marvelous

extraordinarily good or great; used especially as an intensifier

marvellous

achievement and

also

they

are are

a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters

are

more than active to learn anything. As a quick learner, numerous skills taught like how to survive in a society or cooperation and always figured out the goods in them. On the flip side of the coin, children have their own space to bring out some hidden

talents

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talents, for

for example

, they could have been more creative by painting drawings and it depicts to express their emotions through

this

.

However

the adverse part is that children seldom left alone by their friends of having lots of homework or might be they have other plans. In

this

scenario use without

supervision children

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supervision, children

would have been glued to

computer

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a computer

the computer

or television set to kill the time, which may

left

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leave

the negative impact on the

cognition

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cognitive

abilities of children. In conclusion, teamwork has remarkable merits as compared to the self occupied activities. In my opine, children are more productive in peer activities and they learnt to cope up with situations by cooperation they had.