Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Learning is a process to obtain knowledge at every age of one's life.
Although
people believe that engaging their children in structured peer activities in a liesure
time would be beneficial for growth and development of the children. While time available for ease and relaxation
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on the other
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people argue that it is significant for children to learn how to present yourself to others.
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For instance
, playing Soccer game is required teamwork and the leadership to make a goal. Through building coordination could lead the team towards success. Secondly
, being in the similar age children don't afraid to speak up. Thus
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they are are
more than active to learn anything. As a quick learner, numerous skills taught like how to survive in a society or cooperation and always figured out the goods in them.
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for example
, they could have been more creative by painting drawings and it depicts to express their emotions through this
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In conclusion, teamwork has remarkable merits as compared to the self occupied activities. In my opine, children are more productive in peer activities and they learnt to cope up with situations by cooperation they had.Suggestion
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