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In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?

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The number of people who stay single or live in nuclear families has increased faster than people live in extended family groups
.
Accept space
.
 I strongly believe that
this
 is a positive trend in modern
life
. As we know that the more people we live with the more problems we have, so living alone or in small units will help us reduce major conflicts between relatives. Some research proved that when we live in a nuclear family or live on one’s own
also
 help us feel comfortable and relieve a lot of stress after busy days. Arguments between mother-in-law and daughter-in-law in some Oriental lands is no longer a problem in
family’s
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a family’s life
the family’s life
life
. We will have more time for our small family, parents are more connected to children as children have a better educational environment. Another benefit of
this
 way of living is that we can learn how to be a self-
man which
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man, which
are
Suggestion
is
 valuable skills that we need for
life
 and we can decide our days by
own
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the owner
owner
. We
also
 have a more private place for ourselves where we used to share with others when we live in large family groups. No one can annoy us when we are
focus
Suggestion
focused
 on learning or working so the outcome will be better. To sum up, I think the appearance of
this
 tendency is a good news for human
life
 because it can reduce most arguments with relative and live in a world of freedom
,
Accept space
,
 where we can be who we are.
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