In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?

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The number of people who stay single or live in nuclear families has increased faster than people live in extended family groups

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I strongly believe that

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is a positive trend in modern

life

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. As we know that the more people we live with the more problems we have, so living alone or in small units will help us reduce major conflicts between relatives. Some research proved that when we live in a nuclear family or live on one’s own

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help us feel comfortable and relieve a lot of stress after busy days. Arguments between mother-in-law and daughter-in-law in some Oriental lands is no longer a problem in

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a family’s life

the family’s life

life

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. We will have more time for our small family, parents are more connected to children as children have a better educational environment. Another benefit of

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way of living is that we can learn how to be a self-

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man, which

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valuable skills that we need for

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and we can decide our days by

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the owner

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have a more private place for ourselves where we used to share with others when we live in large family groups. No one can annoy us when we are

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focused

on learning or working so the outcome will be better. To sum up, I think the appearance of

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tendency is a good news for human

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because it can reduce most arguments with relative and live in a world of freedom

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where we can be who we are.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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