The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. do you agree or disagree?

#growth #shops #towns #cities

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Now says

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the online shopping is

increased

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increasing

and

this

issue will lead at the end to all shops in our countries to collapse. I quite agree with

this

believe

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this

assay

an analytic or interpretive literary composition

essay

I will explain the causes to rise up the online shopping

then

the effect that in our shop and how we can overcome

this problems

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this problem

these problems

First

the reasons to

dramatly

increase e-

commicere

transactions (sales and purchases) having the objective of supplying commodities (goods and services)

commerce

. It is easy and available way

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You can do it at home or work

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The websites use sales or offer to

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direct toward itself or oneself by means of some psychological power or physical attributes

attract

people more and have.

fast

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Fast

transportation of goods to customers. So your effort is less

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That means, you can get what is you want from any country by only press keys

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your computer. In

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

way

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this

lead to reduce shopping in markets and malls

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some people doesn't like to spend time for shopping and prefer to take their

need

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needs

by telemarketing

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outcome

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the outcome

of selling dropped and shops closed and

fininicial

involving financial matters

financial

support fell down. We. Can solve

this

problem by different ways

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One of important methods is

adverstiment

. Sellers can advertise to their store in networks or boards or magazine. They can make big sales with exceptional prices

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The government can help

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buyer and give support and encourage citizen to take local things. At the

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end, I

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a significant increase

significant increase

in telemarketing

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but

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advantage

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sell

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Fully explain your ideas

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employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs personal information, such as their hobbies and inerests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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