The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. do you agree or disagree?

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Now says
,
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,
the online shopping is
increased
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increasing
and
this
issue will lead at the end to all shops in our countries to collapse. I quite agree with
this
believe
.
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In
this
assay
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
I will explain the causes to rise up the online shopping
then
the effect that in our shop and how we can overcome
this problems
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this problem
these problems
.
First
the reasons to
dramatly
increase e-
commicere
transactions (sales and purchases) having the objective of supplying commodities (goods and services)
commerce
. It is easy and available way
.
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You can do it at home or work
.
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The websites use sales or offer to
attracte
direct toward itself or oneself by means of some psychological power or physical attributes
attract
people more and have.
fast
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Fast
transportation of goods to customers. So your effort is less
.
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.
That means, you can get what is you want from any country by only press keys
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on
your computer. In
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
way
,
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,
this
lead to reduce shopping in markets and malls
,
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,
some people doesn't like to spend time for shopping and prefer to take their
need
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needs
by telemarketing
.
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.
So
outcome
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the outcome
of selling dropped and shops closed and
fininicial
involving financial matters
financial
support fell down. We. Can solve
this
problem by different ways
.
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One of important methods is
adverstiment
. Sellers can advertise to their store in networks or boards or magazine. They can make big sales with exceptional prices
.
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The government can help
this
buyer and give support and encourage citizen to take local things. At the
end I
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end, I
know there is
signifanct increase
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a significant increase
significant increase
in telemarketing
,
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,
but
this
is our responsibility to take
advantages
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advantage
of both. Shops and online
sells
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sell
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • physical stores
  • online retailers
  • retail apocalypse
  • digital economy
  • consumer behavior
  • sustainability
  • commercial landscape
  • high-street
  • consumer trends
  • augmented reality
  • showrooms
  • carbon footprint
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