Some people think the best way to solve global environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In
this
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era of
21st-century
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the 21st-century
the
environment
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's health is
depleting
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depleted
continously
at every point
continuously
. We all know the reason behind
this
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problem is human greed. Our ailing planet is diminishing in health
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
of human's unlimited wants.
For instance
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,
increase
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an increase
the increase
increases
in demand for electricity has left our
environment
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in unhealthy condition. The air, water,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
are
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is
poluted
rendered unwholesome by contaminants and pollution
polluted
these days. Rising wants of
fuel
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as a source of energy is polluting
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environment
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the environment
.
Environmentlist
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Environmentalists
argue that
use
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the use
of
such
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fuel
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must be stopped by the government, and the use of eco-friendly fuels
such
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has CNG and LPG must be enhanced by government through advertisements. Whereas some people believe that by
rising
increasing in quantity or value
raising
the prices of the
fuel
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will help economy to decrease in the demand for the
fuel
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, but
this
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is not the correct way of doing
this
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. The demand of
fuel
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is inelastic
that
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is it
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is, it
is unaffected by the rise in price.
This
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is because cars using these fuels are cheaper and people go for buying these cars. So,
this
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will have no effect on the rising price of the
fuel
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. Over and above, richer and wealthy section of the population will go for these
fuel
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only. So, according to me
this
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problem cannot be solved through
this
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remedy. Out and out
,
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,
every lock has its own key.
This
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problem has its own solution
that is
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we can only save our
environment
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with advertisements and creating awareness in
mind
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the mind
of people.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • emissions
  • alternative energy
  • conservation
  • mitigate
  • renewable energy technologies
  • affordability
  • collective action
  • innovation in energy efficiency
  • global cooperation
  • environmental measures
  • pollution
  • economic disparity
  • revenue
  • sustainable development
  • environmental sustainability
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