Some people think the best way to solve global environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #cost #fuel

this

era of

21st-century

Suggestion

the 21st-century

the

environment

's health is

depleting

Suggestion

depleted

continously

at every point

continuously

. We all know the reason behind

this

problem is human greed. Our ailing planet is diminishing in health

beacuse

for the reason that; on account of

because

of human's unlimited wants.

For instance

increase

Suggestion

an increase

the increase

increases

in demand for electricity has left our

environment

in unhealthy condition. The air, water,

etc

continuing in the same way

etc.

are

Suggestion

poluted

rendered unwholesome by contaminants and pollution

polluted

these days. Rising wants of

fuel

as a source of energy is polluting

environment

Suggestion

the environment

Environmentlist

Suggestion

Environmentalists

argue that

use

Suggestion

the use

such

fuel

must be stopped by the government, and the use of eco-friendly fuels

such

has CNG and LPG must be enhanced by government through advertisements. Whereas some people believe that by

rising

increasing in quantity or value

raising

the prices of the

fuel

will help economy to decrease in the demand for the

fuel

, but

this

is not the correct way of doing

this

. The demand of

fuel

is inelastic

that

is it

Accept comma addition

is, it

is unaffected by the rise in price.

This

is because cars using these fuels are cheaper and people go for buying these cars. So,

this

will have no effect on the rising price of the

fuel

. Over and above, richer and wealthy section of the population will go for these

fuel

only. So, according to me

this

problem cannot be solved through

this

remedy. Out and out

Accept space

every lock has its own key.

This

problem has its own solution

that is

we can only save our

environment

with advertisements and creating awareness in

mind

Suggestion

the mind

of people.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

238 words

<40

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

consumption
emissions
alternative energy
conservation
mitigate
renewable energy technologies
affordability
collective action
innovation in energy efficiency
global cooperation
environmental measures
pollution
economic disparity
revenue
sustainable development
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Some people think the best way to solve global environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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