In many modern societies grandchildren rarely spend any quality time with their grand parents. What do you think are consequences of this?

Grandparents are fun to be with and they shower blessings and their love. In
this
21st century, teenager
do not have
Suggestion
does not have
enough hours to spend with their guardians. I think that, these have negative impacts on a child.
This
essay will discuss the reasons behind my perception and justification in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin
with, there are several effects of the aforementioned situation. The
first
and the foremost
one
is, not spending
little
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less
time
with
grandmaa
the mother of your father or mother
grandma
and
grandpaa
the father of your father or mother
grandpa
grandpa a
can affect the growth of smaller ones. To explain
this
, nowadays, most of the parents do not have
time
to spend with their children because of their hectic schedule. In these cases, if
one
will not give
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
quality
time
with their grandparents, they will tend to get
misleaded
lead someone in the wrong direction or give someone wrong directions
misled
in life.
For instance
, if a minor will not get support by their
elders they
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elders, they
might fall into
trap
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the trap
a trap
of wrong doers.
As a result
,
this
will often disturb the life of an individual. Apart from
this
,
grandbabies
who lives far from their grandfather and grandmother have lack or no awareness of their cultural and family traditions. To be more clear, these days, father and mother even know less about the culture and stories of family, if a child
missies
fail to perceive or to catch with the senses or the mind
misses
out the opportunity to live with their grandparents they do not get to know about their family. Due to
this
, the bond between the families is never formed. To illustrate
this
, in my
fam
the phonological or orthographic sound or appearance of a word that can be used to describe or identify something
form
farm
fame
,
one
of my
cousin
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cousins
named Raina, who is currently
residenting
in Canada,
do not know
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does not know
much rules and
regulartions
an authoritative rule
regulations
regulation
that are followed in her clan. To conclude,
this
essay explained the outcomes of younger
one
not spending
time
with grandparents. In my opinion, grandparents provide support for child and if
leaving
Suggestion
left
this
time
it will often
leads
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lead
to void. So, little ones should invest hours with them to live life happily.
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