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In most parts of the world, people are living longer. What are the possible causes of this situation? Is this a negative or positive development?

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As the
technologies
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technology
technology's
 advances, the
life
expectancy
 is increasing for most of the countries and there are several explanations for the phenomenon. In my opinion, I think the negative impacts outweigh the benefits of
this
 development.
Firstly
, the improvement of the technologies for newborn babies is a major reason for
the longer
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the longest
life
. The dramatic decline of fatalities among babies and the invention of vaccinations significantly contribute to the increased
life
expectancy
.
Secondly
, the medical advancements allow doctors to treat diseases or wounds that were thought to be fatal before.
For instance
, the possibility of getting an organ transplantation from donors or even printing it with 3D printers
have greatly boosted
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has greatly boosted
 the success rates for surgeries.
Thirdly
, the overall better quality of
life
 is
also
 one of the
reason
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reasons
. Easy access to food and water and the ability to maintain personal hygiene have contributed to the wellbeing of people.
Lastly
, the medical advancements on caring for the elderly. All of these are the reasons behind the increased
expectancy
 of
life
. As good as it is to live longer, I believe the disadvantages of the development are much more than the advantages. Only people who can afford to pay the premium
pricing
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price
 of the new technologies are able to benefit from them, resulting in bigger gaps between the rich and the poor.
Additionally
, increased
life
 means more people and a bigger population, which will fasten the rate that food and natural resources are consumed.
Moreover
, just because one can live longer does not mean that one wants to do so. Friends and families might try to keep an individual alive for their own goods rather than
for
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to
 the patient. To summarize, I believe that the increasing
life
expectancy
 that comes with the technology advancements has more negative impacts than the positive ones.
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