some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compered with living in an apartment.

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the world

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a structure that provides privacy and protection from danger

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shield from danger, injury, destruction, or damage

protect

protects

protected

us from the outside word.

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in all the word home or

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life

So in comparison between home and

apartment

home c

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without doubt or question

clearly

has more

apartment

than

apartment

as you will get rest from

rent

payment that sometime higher than your income and

also

you don’t have to w

arry

be worried, concerned, anxious, troubled, or uneasy

worry

wary

about your

next

door

people.

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, no

rent

payment is a most a

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the quality of having a superior or more favorable position

advantage

advantages

you will get for living in

h

ouse.

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a house

the house

houses

You will not w

arry

be worried, concerned, anxious, troubled, or uneasy

worry

about pay your

rent

every month that will affect your l

ife style

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

as 50% or more of your income goes for

apartment

rent

also

that get affected your saving for your dream car or even phone.

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example, before

ten years, I was a dental student and my u

nevirsity

the body of faculty and students at a university

university

not p

roved

give something useful or necessary to

provide

us with

apartment

so I need to search for any

apartment

net to my university, while searching I found a good

apartment

but the

rent

is very high c

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examine and note the similarities or differences of

compared

with my income f

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the body of faculty and students at a university

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cancel

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my gym s

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a payment for consecutive issues of a newspaper or magazine for a given period of time

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to save some m

ony

the most common medium of exchange; functions as legal tender

money

for the

rent

also

I start to cook meals to save m

ony.

the most common medium of exchange; functions as legal tender

money

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Until

my grandfather give me his

house

and I save a lot of m

ony.

the most common medium of exchange; functions as legal tender

money

moneys

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ecound,

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Second

the people

next

to your

door

you don’t know whether they are f

rendily

characteristic of or befitting a friend

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Sometime

you can not even sleep form a nose they make.

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or

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For

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xample I

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example, I

lived in a

pprtment

a suite of rooms usually on one floor of an apartment house

apartment

apartments

for seven y

ears sadily

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years, sadly

years sadly

in my

next

door

there were people loves party every day the sounds is l

ude.

characterized by or producing sound of great volume or intensity

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laid

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I can not sleep at all some time I go to university to sleep there. i

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In

sum,

house

has much more advantages than

a

partment espicly

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apartment, especially

apartment especially

in the

rent

and people to your

next

door

.I recommend to live in

h

ouse.

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a house

the house

houses