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Schools are spending so much time teaching traditional subjects such as history. Some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#schools #time #subjects #history #people #skills #students #job
One stands nowhere without education. Some institutes spent so much time teaching historical
subjects where as
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subjects, whereas
subjects whereas
 some
believes
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believe
 that spending more time on learning practical skills rather than traditional subjects, can help students
to get
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get
 a job. I strongly agree with
this
 statement and my justification will discussed in
ensuing paragraphs
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the ensuing paragraphs
. Nowadays students are more attracted towards practical knowledge
instead
 of studying theoretical subjects. One of the strongest
reason
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reasons
 behind
this
 is practical skills can learn more easily and
fastly
with rapid movements
quickly
 as it can be performed individually and it has direct contact with vision and
brain
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the brain
. So these things can learn completely. Whereas,
on the other hand
 bookish materials don’t contain any visuals, so
student
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the student
feel
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feels
 bored and they try to
mugup
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mug up
 thing which can only raise their academics and not helps in practical life which is very important in jobs. The another cogent reason is many
jobs
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job
job's
 demands expertise in practical skills
for
example mechanical
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example, mechanical
,
doctorial
of or relating to a doctor or doctorate
doctoral
, IT jobs and many more. So
this
 might be a reason why students get diverted towards practical skills. According to research, in foreign
countries many
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countries, many
 schools had stopped teaching theory like history to ignite their minds towards practical skills as they
dony
do not
don't
 have to cram theories.
In conclusion every
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In conclusion, every
 subject has its uniqueness and
importance but
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importance, but
 due to demanding jobs people are forcefully diverted towards practical fields more for their personal benefits, which is a bitter truth of
this
 world.
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