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Some businesses prohibit smoking in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree that this is the right course of action? Give reasons for your opinion

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Smoking in the public areas should be prohibited because it is not a good
health
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 and harmful to people's
health
.To some extent, I agree that
this
 is the right course of action.
First
 of all, smoking is
also
 using the tobacco.It is one of the causes of risk factors for chronic
diseases according
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diseases, according
 to the World
Health
 Organization. It can lead to chronic respiratory diseases and transmit the smokes not only to those who smoke but
also
 to their surroundings
,
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,
especially children.
Secondly
, avoiding smoking in the offices should be warned as it can annoy to the environment and cannot be a healthy area to work happily.The governments should take an action for smoking in all public areas as it can be dangerous for young children and pregnant mothers. It can
also
 affect the fetus from
mother
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the mother
 if the mother inhale the smokes.
Thirdly
, giving the
health
 education about the disadvantages of smoking starting from the communities should be done.In the public areas, the smokers should use smoking
longue
sit or recline comfortably
lounge
lounges
 and if they do not follow the law and regulation
,
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,
should make a serious action. In conclusion, I agree
to that some governments
Suggestion
that some governments
 have banned smoking in all public places as it is not a good
health
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 for all ages.

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