Some people encourage young children to leave their parents house as soon as they become adults while others say children should stay at their parent's house as long as possible. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

There has always been a considerable debate on whether one should live with their parents as long as possible or should walk out at c
ertain age.
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a certain age
certain ages
In my opinion children and parent should stay with each other as long as possible and should look after each other’s w
ellbeing.
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well being
In
this
essay I will be putting forward the some points supporting my opinion and
also
with the reason of others having d
ifference
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a difference
differences
of opinion. Staying apart creates hallow in relationship; decreasing the emotional touch among family members leading to be l
ess sensitivity
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less sensitive
and concerned for each other. As the world is round so is the time in w
orld,
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the world
at young age one needs parents supervision, while growing in the same manner parents need to be taken care while growing during old age and that can be done by staying being together. By being living under the same roof, we can support and help each other to come out of any problem. On the flip side many people support getting a
part
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a part
as turning adult. a
nd
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And
They have many valid reasons for
this
. It makes one become self-dependent, it takes them out of the protective layer and forces to take self-decision and deal with the real world problem which is very important for survival.
This
also
gives required personal space to both the f
or
being one more than three
four
generations and allow them to live life as per t
here
of them or themselves
their
wish with their c
onditions.
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condition
It eliminates the chances of interference in each o
ther
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
lives and reduces the u
nnecessaryresponsibilities.
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unnecessary responsibilities
To summarize all my points stated above, I believe that
although
both the w
ay
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ways
of living has their own merits and demerits but living together is important. Privacy can be sacrificed where the question is to be with each other in all the thin and thick of life.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • independence
  • self-reliance
  • financial responsibility
  • personal growth
  • life skills
  • household maintenance
  • emotional regulation
  • social skills
  • financial stability
  • supportive family environment
  • cultural expectations
  • familial duty
  • sense of security
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