You bought a new HD television last week. At first it seemed to work perfectly but after a few hours a line appeared across the TV and the sound seemed a little strange. You cannot take the TV back to the shop so you decide to write to them. Write a letter of complaint to the shop. In your letter • give them the background information • describe the problem • ask them to resolve the issue

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to register a concern regarding the Sony HD Television model number UHD512018 that I bought on 22nd of December from your Adelaide Street store.
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I would like to express my satisfaction
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the shopping experience provided by your staff and would like you to extend my thanks to the sales Manager
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Robert for
this
,
however
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I am very much disappointed by the quality of
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delivered. It was working perfectly fine in the store during
demonstration
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but
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hour
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after its setup in my home I observed some kind of inconsistency in display and
thereafter
there is a permanent horizontal white line at the
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of
screen
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,
moreover
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since yesterday there has been
issue
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with its audio system as well, the voice is not clear and it continuously gives a beep sound. I had a word with your customer Manager
Mr.
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Singh and he offered me technical support under the warranty terms and
condition
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but I am not ready to settle
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this
. I request you to kindly initiate the process for
replacement
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for
this
defective product as soon as possible as
currently
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it is nothing more than a useless showpiece for me. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Satya Prakash
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